Curve to curve

You are wonder

and I am home lying

curve to curve with you

I am myself most next to you,

just breathing the same air,

and in it, you

and in me, you

We share space in this world,

a cause worthy of king

and queen, we look out

over all, secretly proud

to share and express our most, 

our monument dream,

to all who who would

dream

Reviews

[Shaun Rudie]

Thank you all so much for your comments. That you took time out of your days to read my work is something I take close to heart and am honored.

[Sami Khalil]

I like the idea of a monument dream . A very nice poem...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

A magically romantic write. I enjoyed the metaphors you employed. Excellent work. Lydi**

[Just Kim]

Deep powerful read, enjoyed this

[Holly Mason]

love the thought this brings thank you

[Samuel Dickens]

Words of adoration and "one-ness" of whom, we don't know, but she/he should be flattered.