Once again

Once again

A Poem by Mindy Kay

We're talking again.
Oh Me
Oh My
I am so lost

It is crazy
that I get lost
In your voice
Even ward

My heart
is Jumping
Well my music
is bumping

I need to stop
But....
My heart
It is melting

I been waiting
For anther chance
I wont ever get
But to be your friend

That is
a hard chance
that I
am willing to take

© 2014 Mindy Kay


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We're talking again.
Oh Me
Oh My
I am so lost

It is crazy
That I get lost
In your voice
Ever word

My heart
Is Jumping
Well my music
Is bumping

I need to stop
But....
My heart
It is melting

I been waiting
For another chance
I won’t ever get
But to be your friend

That is
A hard chance
That I
Am willing to take

----

We're talking again.
Oh Me
Oh My
I am so lost

It is crazy
That I get lost
In your voice
Ever word

My heart
Is Jumping
Well my music
Is bumping

I need to stop
But....
My heart
It is melting

I been waiting
For another chance
I won’t ever get
But to be your friend

That is
A hard chance
That I
Am willing to take


I had to dissect this a bit for clarity...there was areas --- I questioned and fixed for you...I believe you will agree...as for the write itself...seems a break-up in friendship...a resolve is in order...since that is made clear in your last lines...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on July 30, 2014
Last Updated on July 30, 2014
Tags: Ex, Love, Hurts, feelings, Friends

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Mindy Kay
Mindy Kay

Webster Springs, WV



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