Shadows

is a short kind of poem about ghost

I speak to the shadows…they seem to like my words.

They move in the darkness, they don’t like to be disturbed.

Lost in a world that I know nothing about, but I know there real because I feel oh so cold when they’re around

Ageless they are now

There alone and confused and dieing to be us….and I feel bad for them

Because die they already done.

Reviews

[That1Nerd23]

This is great!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have felt ghost near. I believe some spirits can leave for some reason. I like the use of the word "shadow". Gave the story life and strength. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sleeping Maiden]

Hmmm i like the start too but it somehow starts to flow a bit not the same as it began. Mysterious though.. cryptic a bit but fascinating at the same! =)
I like the write. just a little bit of edit and it should be fine. ^u^

[Mind Giant]

Thank you for the review. I belive you are very right. It might be time to revised. Thank you

I love the way is starts, but it goes out a bit awkwardly. Overall though, it has a nice mystical feel to it.