As forever...

All words are powerful, and this is what forever means to me

   What does "FOREVER" mean to you?

 

What forever means to me may not mean the same to anyone else. To me it stands for freedom.... Forever to be free! Forever just to be me in my forever.....so how long has forever been around? When did it become forever? When was it found? And the ones that found it did they know it was forever to be around?

 

It stands for everyone that has ever said the words " I love you " to someone else, because one's you haved loved that one....that one is who you'll love...because love is slick, because love is clever and if love is what you feel then that love stands " forever "It stands for gods love and all her grace...it stands for today, which soon will be yesterday. Its stands for that child that was never given the chance... It stands for that parent that turned their back, and now wants today turned yesterday back. It stands for that family trying so hard to survive, it also stands for this other family with so much to give but won't give a smile back... It stands for all of us and for everything at once...

 

so as forever continues... Make sure that your forever is the one you want. Don't leave this earth with out leaving your mark on this world.... Don't leave this earth with out giving a memory worth to hold. As forever continues like it’s always done, as I tell you all I love you like if it was my turn... As forever, well forever she can't speak but forever told me" you want answers? Deep with in is where you must seek" so now I must leave you! But forever it won't be... Because forever is always with you.... Forever is who you'll be.

Author's Note

I need some good critiques....harsh or nice

Reviews

[L.I. Black]

Well...first off, the subject is good and the way you word things is quite interesting. The only things I see that need critiques is the fact it's more Free Verse than am Poem Poem...not that that's a bad thing. I would just change the layout of it a little, put more space between the lines. A few things sound a little odd, but it's nothing major.
It's really quite good.

[Frantzuu]

This is a great piece, the tittle goes with it well. Sometimes people write great poems but have trouble picking out the right tittle which I think is important to me. Above all you did a great job expressing this piece.

I have nothing bad to say, but I agree with the comment bellow me. Great job!