Dying

Dying

A Poem by Mina

I empathize, therefore,
Sacrifice much more 
than I desire.
Pleasure comes in
Waves of my lover's
Laughter- if sadness,
I cry despite...
The anger fired at my 
Mind, the f**k you's,
The not so kind
B***H heard over 
Over again...
Just forget it -says
 my heart, my friend.
Empaths never curse,
Meaning sending
Negative to equal beings...
So I must pray, meditate,
Sacrifice much more
Than I ever felt I could.
What binds us to love 
Is the feeling,
But what does one hold 
on to...
When the other is
Slowly dying?

© 2015 Mina


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The words told a sad story in the poetry.
"So I must pray, meditate,
Sacrifice much more
Than I ever felt I could.
What binds us to love "
The above lines are true and we will know often in a long life. Living or dying. We must lead with kindness and concern. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great read, I rather enjoy your writings. And look forward to reading more.

Posted 9 Years Ago


True empaths have it really hard and the speaker seems to exhibit the symptoms of such, love is a rainbow and/or an anchor dragging them down to the depths depending on the state of others and yet like a survivor of the Titanic they hang on to bits of their lover even though they can see their demise in the future with the ship. Not a nice way to go. Wonderfully penned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is great!! check out my work if you want! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The words told a sad story in the poetry.
"So I must pray, meditate,
Sacrifice much more
Than I ever felt I could.
What binds us to love "
The above lines are true and we will know often in a long life. Living or dying. We must lead with kindness and concern. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 3, 2015
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Tags: dying, feels, love, twenty two, hearts, unrequited, misunderstanding, soulmates

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