The Beginning

The first chord

The first line

The first look

The first rhyme

 

Those rare moments of sheer bliss

When life forms perfect piece by piece

When doors fly open, let in the breeze

When walls do crumble and bring release

 

When hope is mere hope no more

When you are found by what you are looking for

When there is so much to explore

When you forgive what's come before

 

That tiny atom of breath divine

New universes spawn within that line

Bold hunger races up your spine

When you embark, within the light resign

 

Creation's yours, you know that you are winning

When you have found your way to the beginning

 

Reviews

[seeeker78]

I loved that, so full of hope.

[The Lady Anasteja]

Oh, I loved it! Brilliant!!

[Micheal Teal]

Magnificent!

Your words fill my heart and inspire my soul. Reading your words is a blessing. Thank you for sharing such a profound poem. I celebrate its beauty and form. I will treasure each word. Well done!

[Tomás Ó C..]

Life is often the path to the real beginning, at which time life really starts. Love the rhyme scheme...

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Very nice write, very good indeed I loved reading this very much thank you for posting. ^_^


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