Fragmented

Fragmented

A Poem by Mimozi

I struggle to put all the pieces together

I try for completion, I reach for perfection

I stretch far beyond the end of my tether

But all that I see is the same cracked reflection

 

Some days are bad and some days are worse

Ideal and reality never see eye to eye

No escape, tough I try, I am living the curse

I'm beginning to think I am aiming too high

 

I studied the problem, I looked in the cracks

I went searching for answers and my fears were cemented

I have been in denial ignoring the fact

That my fragments are all irreparably fragmented.

 

 

© 2008 Mimozi


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It is not the fact that it is broken... but how well we try and put it back together... you dont throw away a Ming vase for one crack... loved the rhyme...

Posted 16 Years Ago


Very nice write, I loved the way you explaind this scene and I did like the flow. Good write my friend.


S.D.Blankenship the GOTHICCOWBOY

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 5, 2008

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Mimozi
Mimozi

Dublin, Ireland



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Born and raised in Montana, Bulgaria but living, working, dreaming and struggling in Dublin, Ireland for over a decade. Writing is something I have always enjoyed doing and never did enough of. It was.. more..

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