Midnight Comes

Midnight Comes

A Poem by Millionth Muse

Parting clouds hasten

the charcoal embrace of night--

Celestial dreams.

© 2010 Millionth Muse


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What pretty three lines. Mostly I like the imagery and the use of hasten and charcoal. In these types of poems, it's really the words that you use to bring the desired effect. And I think you did that here :)

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