Midnight Comes

Parting clouds hasten

the charcoal embrace of night--

Celestial dreams.

Reviews

[JenLyn]

Love it, great imagery! :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a nice haiku.

[Poetic Beauty]

short and to the point. I can picture night rolling.

[Matt]

this poem is seductive :D
you have a talent i do not.
i cant write haiku's for anything.,

[nostal]

I found this very calming, sort of mystical.
Lovely haiku.

[DBURKE]

This is one art I have not mastered but I give you great credit for doing it with ease. This is indeed a great Haiku- and a wonderful picture painted in just a few words!

[The Analog Kid]

Nice haiku! It's all about word choice. Charcoal, embrace, and celestial...love these.

Patrick

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I agree this are difficult to do but you make it look easy... great imagery.

[J.P. Bristow]

lovely....the haiku is so hard to do well thats why its such an art in Japan...this is well done.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

You're a haiku author. Well done.