Wind in Winter

Escaped pages soar

across a rain-slicked parkway--

Magnum opus lost. 

Reviews

[QuothCorvid]

I actually really liked the title. The poem did a great job of capturing a brief moment in time! Well written!

[Tony]

Great haiku, I'm thinking...I hope this isn't for real. I can see the scene of you running to retrieve it all. I hope you have a good memory, should this be true.

Antony

[Lucia Morgan]

you have great talent, and your haikus are sublime.

[ICS]

Very nice. My only critique would be of the title. I'd leave the season(so we know it's winter), but drop the wind (I feel that "soar" expresses the wind within the first line).

I do like this very much. All to dust.

Best,
- Ian

[Natalie.]

Wow. I so admire haiku writers...to make something so beautiful in so small a space...It's an amazing gift.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very creative expression of a winter storm.
You rock the haiku.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Another great Haiku!!