Cold Hearted Sweetheart

Sometimes we can adore Ms.Imperfect

 

Cold-Hearted Sweetheart

 

She’s everything

I adored her

Not because she’s a beauty queen

Nor a prom princesse

Because she’s a cold-hearted sweetheart

 

Elegance wrapped in steel

Heart surrounded by thorns

She’s every prince’s dream

An acid in a cream

 

Look into her eyes

You can see a fighter

Love or hated,she is destined for

She is a tower

Forever for me,whatever for them

 

She like being envied

Because she lived for it.

I bowed at her on my knees

Catching her flying kiss

 

When I will be her?

I asked like a little girl

Her elegance is demure

But I’ll doubt we have the same future

Reviews

[hmm]

wow so very nicely written and done. love the colorful font.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very good. You create a picture of a powerful and beautiful woman. I like the story and the flow of your words. A very good ending to the poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[chris' girlfriend]

wow i like that one alot!!!
your poems are good too

[Enigma]

I like it!!! So simple and so true....
Elegance wrapped in steel

Heart surrounded by thorns

She's every prince's dream

An acid in a cream"
^^^^^^My fav lines!!!
Well Done!!

[Rockebah]

I love how you showed different sides of someone. The poem was good. Simple and enjoyable.