Middle of March

In the middle of March

he knelt to the ground

A burst of emotions

coming from his mouth

 

I love you, he said

then held out a ring

Isn't it romantic

when you heart starts to sing?

 

I said yes, of course

what else could I say

Although my mind said no

My heart had its way

Reviews

[Joanna Maharis]

A beautiful and passionate piece. I could feel the love that went on between the narrator and the love of his life. Well done. I loved it. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. This piece is such a beautiful portrait of love.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! The flow of this piece is beautiful and it is indeed very lyrical...Very well penned :)

Aww this is such an adorable little piece. I love the flow and tone of the writing. Short and sweet, well done :)
~Calypso Firebutton

[Gandré]

hmm so good to follow your heart!
The mind cannot feel and the heart cannot think.
It is good this way. you wrote a sweet poem
and it is even rhyming ... it is innocent.

[We are young.]

Oh how the heart always seems to win over the mind, beautiful expression of love and a propsal for marriage.

[An owl on the moon]

I love the lifting feel of your words, that celebration of life and love... Wonderfully done!

[Tate Morgan]

NIce poem but the rhyme in the first stanza doesnt work

[Fran Marie]

I love you, he said

then held out a ring

Isn't it romantic

when you heart starts to sing?



yes, yes it is, very romantic indeed!! when you're in love

your heart sings its own sweet song~

THanks for sharing this lovely write!!

Fran Marie