A Declaration by Draco Malfoy

A mop of brown hair he has seen,

Through wide grey eyes, never so keen

'Who could have missed it' declares he

Draco pushed on so stubbornly,

'Hermione Granger please, do preen'

 

 

Reviews

[ATG]

I think you hit on something Draco might say. I liked this. It was well thought out and well written.

[-Aurelia Mirella]

Harry Potter is my favorite series of all time, and your poem did it justice!

I can definitely see Draco saying this or thinking it. Haha, again, great job!

Keep up the wonderful work! :]

Always,
-Aurelia Mirella

[An owl on the moon]

I love the Harry Potter series, and so just had to read this! It's formed so perfectly and the rhythm and imagery created are just right!

[Joanna Maharis]

This is a beautiful piece of writing, in that you enable the reader to get inside the mind of Draco Malfoy, in terms of his disgust and contempt for Hermione Granger, in that no matter what he attempts to do, he can never be rid of her. I like the way you say so much through using just a few words. Everything is so beautifully packaged, in that all the intricate details are incorporated so beautifully. I also like the imagery incorporated throughout the poem.