The Adventures of Andrews In World War Two

The story with not a correct grammar..

   THE ADVENTURES OF ANDREWS IN WORLD WAR TWO

 

 

 

CHAPTER 1   

     

 

     Today, January 13 1940.The time for me to work as a man for saving France, Italy, Poland, Belgium, Netherlands, Czech Republic, Austria and German from Nazis. I’m a new recruit soldier in US military. I have learnt how to reload, firing and melee attack from this smelly camp. Today is a remarkable day for US, England and Russia to attack Nazis in France. “No pressure!! Remember lads, one bullet is so Important. So don’t waste it! Keep your target is at enemies head. This is not a practice mission! It's real." Sgt. Warren told us as we reach to the France boundaries.

      

     After that, there is a storming sound hit our lorry that is full of group Hotel Six. Suddenly another storming sound which is I think a mortar hit group Sector Seven. “Take cover!! Use formations! Keep it tight! We don't want to lose another man!!”Sgt Warren told to the group. Of course, we had lost  In a few minutes, Nazis armies are here to defend their place from being taken by us. I looked at my hands it is shaking like it's can't be use. My heart beats, my face sweats. My hearts say “Come on Andrews! Show your anger for your country, for your life, for the world meant to be peace!!" I wake up from the muddy mud with faithful face. I ran to the fallen log and take my position. I pull the trigger and its hit the man covering at the house. I throw frag grenades to the rooms Sgt. Warren move closer to the house. “Andrews cover me!” He said. I cover him by shooting to the windows.

       

       Things getting quiet. “Hotel six, moves."Sgt. Warren whispers. We move quietly to the house. After entering the house, all soldiers dead. The day  is getting dark. “Come on lets move. We don't want to sleep in a same house with enemy’s corpse. At least we take a move. The war just began and nobody is hurt."Sgt. Warren says. We make the decision to move. We move queitly.When at the bushes we hear some footsteps. “Don’t shoot. We attack with melee attack." Sgt. Warren whispers. “Wait for my signal.1, 2, Attack!! Who's there!?” He says. There are ten people of them. “It’s Sector Seven !"I say. “Who are you people?" Sgt. Lawrence from the Sector Seven ask. “We are Hotel Six Sir !"Sgt. Warren say. I don’t know why he call Sgt.Lawrence sir ? “Now we are 15 soldiers. come on let's move !" Sgt.Lawrence say. After we move, we found air turret gun with infantry. "Pvt. Kieran, Bowen and Godfrey, move to the bunker for ambush. wait for the explode, I’m going to plant a pastel charges on that turret gun after that we ambush them. William, Freeman and Houston go to that bunker. Wait for my explode. The rest of you follow me."Sgt. Lawrence crouch slowly to the air turret gun. unfortunately, the soldiers in the air turret gun not seeing Sgt. Lawrence. After he plant the pastel charge, he come back slowly."Shrshhsssssfaaaboommm!!!!!!" the explode sounds.

      

      "Attack !!" Sgt.Lawrence say. I ran to the bunker to get in while shooting at the infantry’s take cover. Suddenly a mortar hit the bunker. Sgt. Warrens hits. I run to him and I found that half of his body is separated. his leg is gone."Sargeant."I say. He looked at me with his old face and say to me "Kid.. if I’d had died cause of this p.. Please give my name tag and my bag to my family...whatever you do don't open the bag...""okay sir !"i say. “Andrews!!, Andrews !!"Sgt.Lawrence try to reach me while he's inside the bunker. “Andrews !come on do you want to die !Just leave that old folk !He's now a dead corpse !"I just can't do anything cause my rank is Private. After that I run to Sgt.Lawrence. We tried to escape the bunker while the front door is colapse."There’s no way out. We got to do the hard way because there is no easy way. “Andrews! , plant a satchel charge on that wall!” Sgt.Lawrence says. I go plant a satchel charge on the wall. After it's explode, were at the back of the bunker. Sgt. Lawrence run to the cornfield we all follow him. There’s a group of tanker heading our way. It’s Americans.

      

       "You're in what group ?"The man upside the tank say. “Hotel Six and Sector Seven." Sgt.Lawrence say. “If you want to live, 5 people upside that tank , another 5 up that tank and rest of you up that tank. were heading home.” The man say. When at the camp i search for the General and say “Sir i wish I could gave this to Sergeant Warren family. we’ve lost him.” I say to the General. “Yes you can. tomorrow you and Cpl.Colins go to his family house.” The General say. When tomorrow begins. I’m suited with US army uniform and ready with Cpl.Colins to go to Sergeant Warren family’s. I get in to the jeep with Cpl.Colins.We go to his house. When were there we found a wrecked house with his rooftop look like want to fall. There is an old lady and a few kids coming toward us and the old lady say. “US military ?"Excuse me madam. Are you a wife of Sergeant Warren ?" I say. " No I’m his mother.” she say. “where is his wife ?"I say. “his wife dead two month ago why ?"she say. “I’ve got bad news because Sergeant Warren is dead. Here, this is his bag pack and name tag. he say to me don't open the bag pack until i give this to his family.” I say to her and give the bag pack to her. “he’s d..dead?”she say. “I’m afraid i must say yes.” I say. and the old lady cried slowly. “is this his child ?"I ask her."YY...Yes.” she say. “Where is my daddy?”his son asks. “your daddy went to a beautiful place son. and he's will never come back."Cpl.Colins say to the kid. “that means my dad is fine right ?"he asks again.Cpl.Colins looked at me and say "of course son.” Continued chapter 2... 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ainaaabdul]

good grief! kinda good, even though the are some grammar mistakes. i love it how that sgt lawrence gave out commands. keep up the goody oody work =]

[44Neemo]

thank you for the comment.i will improve next time.

[Thus Said Broken]

not my sort of topic but the writing itself was good. keep working at it.

[Syldor]

The story behind this is definitly great. The grammar and such is not so, but perfectly understandable. I'm sure, without a doubt, this is something you will easily be improved over time. I think it is wonderful that you are pursueing your love of writing and can not wait to see your growth.