Darkness

A poem about a girl just a normal everyday school girl who hides the hurt she feels

Do you see her?
Do you care about her?
Would you hold her if she asked?
Or would you just walk away like you always do?
She feels no love.
She feels so lost.
Her heart cold as ice.
Her soul auctioned off to the devil to hide the light.
Her smiles are fake.
Never were they even real.
Her eyes seeing nothing but lies.
Feeling nothing but hurt.
And reveling nothing but silence.
She can't feel.
Only numbness is all she feels.
Is it already to late for her?
She's losing faith in all she used to believe in.
She walks around with a mask on.
Not wanting anyone to know the real her.
But maybe--and all is if-- she might still have faith.
But it's to dark for her to see.
Nothing but darkness surrounding her.
Not bothering to stop it.
Swallowing her up inside.
Until she fades away.
No one knows her.
Never knew the true her.
Is it to late to stop the darkness?
Isn't there someone who'll help this poor girl?
Before it's to late?
Darkness is all she feels...
For now...

Reviews

[Scarlett Secret]

Very captivating. You're a great poet!

[Scrawl]

there are to many girls and guys alike that go through life feeling like this and you pretty much pegged the feeling down to a t i love it good job

[The Analog Kid]

It seems to be about about a prostitute. Nice descriptive phrasing. Makes you feel sorry for the girl...

Patrick