My only weakness

My bf is 17 and I'm 15 so I thought I'd write this poem for him.

My only weakness.

My only sin.

My love for you has grown for so long.

It'll only keep getting stronger.

It's ironic how we met,

it's ironic how we caught on.

You weaken my soul as you plunder my heart.

Who'd to think we're such different ages.

Yet not as far as we maybe.

Away from our loving arms.

So as you leave and wave goodbye.

I'll wait for the next day to wave hello again.

My only weakness,

My only sin,

My only love.

Reviews

[deeps]

This kind of reminds me of something like in Shakespeare!
I like this write, it's such a longing and hoping!
Wonderfully written and such a wonderful flow

[SilentDreamer]

Cute, flows well. Kinda sad, and interesting at the same time. Good job.