blista blues

a could not find my shoes who knew that , that would inspire me !

I found my socks
but I got no shoes
so I am walking down town
with my blista blues
cracks in the sidewalk
my feet don't feel so strong
why can't me and this street
just try to get along
I use to have no worries
about steppin on glass
but now with no shoes
these obstables I must pass
oh my shoes
please tell me were you've gone
I wannna go outside
and at least step on my lawn
I wanna stomp on the floor
to make a loud sound
I wanna step on a bug
and crush it to the ground
but withh no shoes
these things I cannot do
without my laces to guide me through

Reviews

[Adora.xo]

Ahha! Awesome rhyme scheme, it's playful, innocent, fun and has a certain beat that makes you wanna keep reading! Great job!!

[Amelia Angel]

hehe. I really like this one Miles ^_^
It's got a good bounce to it ;)

[Wolfe Greytome]

I really liked this. Terrific flow and an overall fun feel to it.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Fantastic rhythm and flow.. I found this fun, refreshing and unique.. I hope you found your shoes! Great work .. keep at it! =)