HEAR

HEAR

A Story by Milan
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3 friends keep hearing bangs on their door, but everyone else says they can't hear it, are the friends just hearing things or are the people that bad of hearing they can't even hear bangs on a door?

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There was a knock at their door. Melanie, Christopher, and Rose were startled. "Some family moved in a few days ago, they have teenagers, and they're probably doing some kind of pranks to the neighbors," said Rose trying to find a reason why someone would knock this late at night. Melanie and Christopher weren't convinced, "Who would stay up late just to do a stupid prank?" argued Christopher.

So, there they were, trying to figure out who would knock on their door at 12:39 AM, in a cold, gloomy  November. After 30 minutes, they thought whoever knocked on their door must have left, so they decided to go to sleep. At 12:56 AM, An even louder knock was heard from the kitchen, this time, Melanie was tired and scared so she decided to call the police. When the police arrived, they searched around the area and questioned neighbors if they heard any knocks on their door, but all the neighbors said they did not hear any knocks on their door.

The police decided to leave since there was nothing to search and no other sounds were made. After that, Melanie, Rose, and Christopher were too tired to care, so they decided to put on a camera to see who was the fool who was knocking on their door. During the night, there were a lot of knocks on the door, some quiet and some loud. In the morning, the friends rarely got sleep, they checked the camera, and to their surprise, no one was there, at their door, knocking, instead, there was just nothing.

Melanie, Christopher, and Rose were so scared and confused, that they could barely talk, after some time, they relaxed and decided to call their pastor to see who could figure out what was going on. The pastor arrived, and when he saw the video, he was too confused to speak, "My dear children, There is no sound on the video, nothing seems out of order, I suggest to see a doctor to check your ears", "What?, when we saw the video, it had sound!, I do not mean to be rude pastor, but I believe you should visit the doctor" argued Rose, "My dear, my ears still have the potential to hear, but if you don't believe me, ask your neighbors, they will show you and your friends".

Melanie went around her neighborhood to prove she and her friends were right about the sounds, but each one of their neighbors claimed they simply did not hear the sounds, "They're lying! How could they not hear the loud bangs!?" said Melanie, suddenly, the same knock on the door was heard, Melanie got up, and when she almost reached for the door, her alarm went off. Beep Beep Beep, Melanie woke up startled, she checked her alarm, 8:00 AM, "Huh?" said Melanie, Was all of this just a dream? While Melanie was contemplating, there was a knock on her door.

© 2024 Milan


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Milan
I wrote this when I was in 7th grade, if anything seems out of order and doesn't make sense pls let me know, i was cray cray

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Everything is beautiful, you weren't crazy, just heavily creative

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Added on October 28, 2024
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Tags: suspence, supernatural

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Milan
Milan

Miami springs, FL



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HAIII I'm Milan!! but i'm also known as Mile, Milen, or Millie >_< i'm a beginner writer and hope to improve my stories My main genres are: Fantasy, romance, ЛГБТК, .. more..