The Devil's Aria

The Devil's Aria

A Story by Mila
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A woman's beloved song became her soul sold to the devil.

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The Devil’s Aria


Lanterns lit the canal way as the gondola drew closer to the bridge. The city was alive, its heart beating at a rapid pace. Laughter, songs, dance and music was its breath. The lanterns shone an ethereal gold. The canal’s waters were crystal clear yet black and the sky’s beautiful stars reflected like diamonds studded into an uneven sculpture.

 

Aria watched the scene before her as the gondola passed from under the bridge. Her long, auburn hair blew in the breeze and the broken violin sat in her lap, its strings dangling from all different angles. The people passing by the canal afforded her few glances, but none of them let their eyes wander to her for long. After all, why would they? They couldn’t see her, not really.

 

“A beautiful night.” The tall gondolier said, his face a picture of calm, “And you look lovely, madam.”

 

Aria squinted up at him and shook her head, “Only the Devil speaks with the dead.”

 

The gondolier only smiled and hummed a tune that caused shivers to run up Aria’s spine. It was subtle, to say the least, but the foreboding sense of longing for what could have been hung thick in her long-lost spirit. Her eyes were forever overflowing with the tears she had so longed to shed, and her hands were stained with the blood drawn from her own body.

 

Her hair coasted over her bare back and her lips were still painted neatly with the red lipstick she had worn on her way to the last stage. Her eyes reflected the stars of the clear sky and the skirts of her dress were as black as the canal waters below. All around her, lovers strolled the streets and plazas, smiling at one another and dancing to the tune that lost Aria her soul.

 

“Are those tears in your lovely eyes?” The gondolier asked her, “Why, madam? Why do you cry?”

 

“The same reason everyone does.” Aria whispered, “I had something to lose, and I lost it.”

 

“What did you lose?”

 

Aria did not bother replying to that. She merely stared towards the romantic scenes of the world around her and wished herself away from this place. If she had the strength, she would have tossed the broken violin into the canal and let it sink into the same oblivion that denied her.

 

“Was it a lover?” The gondolier asked.

 

“No.” Aria shook her head, running a finger over the bloodstained edges of her violin, “No…it was a song.”

 

A song, indeed. Aria had known it well. Day after day she had practiced it on her beloved violin, hoping that more than the spirits around her would her it. Her life was that song. Everything she had ever hoped to achieve was written on the bar of notes and tunes. Had she had her way, she would have been center stage during her final stand, and all those in attendance would have basked in the glory that was her ethereal melody.

 

It was a pain that it never came. It was a solid truth that she would never experience what could have been. The memories of it all came to her like the breath of a chilly wind. The notion of what had come to pass felt to her like she stood on the edge of a cliff for all eternity but would never witness the image of her casting herself off of it. Forever to remember such macabre images…did she not have a reason to cry?

 

“A song from the graceful hands of a beautiful woman.” The gondolier said, drawing Aria from her thoughts once more, “Perhaps it is not too late to show the world what sort of music you can make.”

 

The drawing of fresh blood dripped daintily from Aria’s eyes and stained the dark cloth of her skirts, “No one will ever hear my song.”

 

As the luminous light of the lamps enhanced the shadows on her face, Aria felt the blood rolling down her cheek, mixing in with her tears. She remembered when her envy became her soul.

 

It was the day of her final sin.

 

It was the reason her song would never be heard.

 

“Only the Devil can speak to the dead.” She whispered as the scene around them changed from the beautiful night of the canal to the dark, dreary and misty terrain of purgatory.

 

The gondolier turned to her, his face now stripped and mutilated to the point where it even sent chills up Aria’s spine, “I will take you now to your final stage.”

 

As he rowed the gondola under a final pass towards the never-ending horizon of darkness, Aria could hear a song in the distance. It was faint, but frighteningly familiar.

 

“You will now forever hear the Devil’s Aria.” The gondolier said, his voice now masked with a deep, gravely baritone that echoed into oblivion.

 

It no longer denied her.

It was the song to be played on the eve of my passing. It was the song to be played on the way to my final stage.

 

“Take me to my audience.” Aria whispered, her tears of blood continuing to roll down her cheeks as her restored violin glowed in her hands. Perhaps it was just her imagination, but the sound of claps and cheers mixed in with the tune of her song.

 

Her final sin awaited on the last stage she would never stand on.

© 2014 Mila


Author's Note

Mila
I saw an art print on Tumblr that inspired this story. It was floating around in my head and I managed to get most of it down on. I hope you guys liked it, read and review! :)
I'll have a news post up in my WC blog soon!

Recently featured on projectpen.com :) Super excited!!

Reviews=motivation

<3, Mila

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Wow! I love this wonderful story! Great job! I'm not sure if it helps, but I think I found a mistake in the section "A song, indeed. Aria had known it well. Day after day she had practiced it on her beloved violin, hoping that more than the spirits around her would her it." - I believe there should've been hear.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Mila

9 Years Ago

Thank you for that!! :)



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Okay! This is a very stylish piece and style goes far with me. I love it. I think that it intrigues and captures very visually.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Nice FF! As always, spectacular work. You're very vivid with your description

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you!! :) :D
Very good flash fiction Mila! I loved the change in the scenery coupled with the gondolier's changing voice, really makes the reader FEEL the change in the story... a change that the violinist must surely have felt her self. Great vision, great description. The gondolier was very well done in all ways! Good work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! So glad you enjoyed :)
This was pretty creepy. I like it. Well written prose. Excellent tone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
A dark and haunting tale…

NOTES:
"…spirits around her would [hear] it."
"…she would never stand [upon]." I recommend this change because it just sounds better to my ear.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the review and the notes, I'll get right on those! :)
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

You're welcome. Glad I could help.
You are a very talented writer, the imagery you write is very vivid and it makes it easy for the reader to lose themselves in the setting. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much, I am so glad you enjoyed! :)
Exquisite, Mira! Just as the other reviews said, ethereal, dark, moody. I love your book but this was a great departure from it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! :):)
Wow, i love how you create your worlds, each one has a romantic feel. You may want to divorce your heart from the word ethereal. It is a great word however its in every story you've written and repetition throws the reader off from your wonderful, and imaginative stories.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you! And yeah I agree I seem to have an unnatural affair with that word. I've been revising so.. read more
An intriguing write, and a subtle touch with the woman's name. Well written, it flowed well and kept me wanting to read, to learn more about the whole history.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

But I'm evil and I'll leave it there so as to keep all of you guessing, mwahahahaha! XD Thanks for t.. read more
NoelHC

10 Years Ago

That is the beauty of the short story format, you can write a very interesting story, and leave much.. read more
Mila

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much! And by all means, send me those RR's! I'm useless with reviews right now but, as I s.. read more
Very well written it immediately caught my interest and kept it through the entire time, I enjoyed reading this piece it was certainly interesting a tale of a woman who never got to play her final song for tragedy struck before she could. I wonder is this the same bridge as the one in the other story? How Aria felt I can imagine I would feel if my stories were never published. I loved this piece maybe because it is a tragedy, but I really had fun reading it. Good Work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review! Yes, I'm weird with this whole bridge between life and dead, and there is .. read more
Malister Mikey

10 Years Ago

I love Greek Mythology so yes I did catch onto that. I knew the bridges had to be similar somehow m.. read more
Mila

10 Years Ago

Thank you. And I plan to read your work very soon! :)

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