Secret's

This is actually a song not a poem but they don't have that in the types. My friend wrote this with my help and i think it turned out good.

Can you hear them,

There all around us,

Spreading things,

That don't dissapear,

they take it,

that take it all,

till you have nothing left,

all your secret's revealed.

 

Now your secrets,

are all recealed,

no one cares,

they take them all in,

they change them,

make a mess,

spreading rumors,

that don't dissapear.

 

Somethings they said,

are'nt that true,

they change the things,

that they've collected from you,

 

Now your secret's,

are all revealed,

noone cares,

they take them all in,

they change them,

and make a mess,

spreading rumors,

that don't dissapear.

 

They act all cool,

even though,

they are'nt that cool,

throught silence,

they break it,

by being,

fouls.

 

It's hard to say,

that i am great,

to people all around,

 

Now your secret's,

are all revealed,

no one care's,

they take it all in,

they change them,

and make a mess,

spreading rumors,

that don't dissapear.

 

They don't dissapear,

there secret's,

in the hall,

in the back,

or where ever you are,

now all your secret's,

are revealed.

Reviews

[hillzz]

awh thanks im proud of you too
i need to tell u sumthing on tuesday.....
lol
ttyl

[Mikuru]

lol you did a good job on it and i'm very proud of you. Your a very good writer :)

[hillzz]

i worte this it turned out awsome reading it now i cant believe i wrote that:P