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this is another story idea i wanted people to tell me if it was a good thing to start and stuff. i know some of this is from the anime show "Fullmetal Alchemist" but this is from a dream i had and i thougth it was good and would be an interesting story f

Edward was in the other world and was hanging out with Winry (she came throw the gate with a speacial plan thing) but another friend (boy) was forcing ed to have *** with him when Winry was in the other room. It broke his foot and Winry did'nt like that. So Winry fixed him up and went to her own world

Later in the winter Winry came throw the gate's to see how Edward was doing. When she saw him, he was skating and kept falling onto his butt.

When Winry asked how he was doing, he got upst. Then he showed her and there was human transmutatio circle's every where. Edward got depressed by what his "friend" did to him and wanted out of that world. So Winry told him that she was going to find a way to bring him back home (he could'nt go in the plan thinging because it would greject him and push him out of it ((they tryed :P)) ).

Edward got very happy when Winry told him that she was also going to bring Roy Mustang and Alphonse with her when she was going to come back to that world.

But what's going to happen when Roy and Edward have to share a room? XD