The Pain Of you stopped

this was made only for the hell of it. i don't know why i made this but i really wanted to and i thought i should add it anyway :)

i wish...

whule i'm here doing dishese

that you could understand

the way i feel

and give me your hand

oh if only it were real

 

Day after day

and every tuesday

i watch you hang with your friends

but when you see me you never say

"Hey! what's up?"

and that still kill's me today

 

the day you cryed

i smiled

the first day you ever cared

when you saw me with tears down my face

you never thought i could do it

but remember,

i was in so much pain

and now i'm free

i loved you then and i live you know

but i did what i could to stop my pain

don't blame youself

the blood is only a sign

that the pain of you....

    Stopped.

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[Mikuru]

i think i did a good job on this i made it when i was really sad because i really like this one guy and he act's like i'm not even breathing so i wrote this poem of what could happen because of all this pain i'm keeping inside my heart.

I know it's sad to people but it's ok i'm not planing on this actually happening to myself. i talkws my my mother about what i was feeling and i finally Happy about my life. Keep reading later this week or next week i'm going to put a song i wrote up :)