Surviving

      The Gargoyle looked up and zoned in on Ara. She took a step back, shaking in fear. It looked her up and down, its nostrils flaring at the smell of fresh blood. Its bloody mouth opened and growled. "Human.....evil.....kill..."

     "W....what are you talking about?!" Ara yelled, angry. It roared at her, making her tremble with fear.

      "You DESTROY Gargoyle home! Filthy humans must DIE!" It took a step towards her, blood and saliva falling from its open maw onto the carpet.

     "I don't understand. Your not real! Gargoyles are stone figures!" It growled low in its throat.

     "Rafeal is real as human. Rafeal the Gargoyle is a living creature." Rafeal took another step towards Ara, she turned and ran. Rafeal roared and started to go after her and as his head poked out of the door, Ara smashed a vase over his head. He roared out in anger. Ara ran to the stairs and ran down them, Rafael following. Ara hit the floor running, she turned and ran down the hallway to get to the basement door. 

      Rafeal reached through the bars on the stairs and tore her shirt open. She ground her teeth and kept running, she could tell the Gargoyle's claws had broken open her skin on her shoulder. She made it to the basement door and pulled it open, to her surprise she saw Kora looking up from the bottom step. Ara heard a crash from the front door. She rushed in and closed the door, locking it. She ran down the steps and touched her sister's face with her good hand. "K...Kora?" Kora didn't say anything and Ara realized she had been crying and her eyes were unseeing. "Kora?! Kora! Look at me! Kora!" Ara yelled shaking her sister and slapping her. 

   "W...what?!" Kora yelled at Ara after a good slap to the face. Ara sighed in relief and then bite her lip as the wound on her shoulder started to bleed faster. "Ara! What happened?!" Kora yelled, horrified. They both looked up as the creature went back up the stairs to finish off it's meal. 

    "I...it clawed me. Kora, I might bleed out." Ara said, afraid. Kora watched her sister's skin turn white. She shook her head.

    "No, no you won't. You'll be fine Ara." Kora went and got dry towels from the dryer. She brought them over and put one on Ara's shoulder. "Let me look at your arm."

    "Kora....it's the only thing keeping me from bleeding out. I should be dead by now." Ara said, getting sleepy, her eyes losing the normal shine of life. "Ara! Ara stay with me! We have to change out the rag. Let me look at it." Kora said looking up and seeing Ara' s eyes closed. Kora slapped her and yelled. "Stay with me! You can't die! I won't allow it!" Ara's head rolled to the side. "Ara please!" Ara opened her eyes and looked at Kora. 

  "Tell mom, dad, and Timmy that I love them." Her eyes closed once again.

  "Don't leave me with this curse Ara! Please!" Ara's eyes opened again and looked at Kora. 

  "What curse Kora?" Ara said, her breathing coming in slow breaths. 

Author's Note

It's better if listened to horror music.

Reviews

[Obscured by the Shadows]

Okay, my biggest critique would be that when a conversation is happening, you must must must make a new paragraph each time. For example, the first part of your story would look like this:

The Gargoyle looked up and zoned in on Ara. She took a step back, shaking in fear. It looked her up and down, its nostrils flaring at the smell of fresh blood. Its bloody mouth opened and growled. "Human.....evil.....kill..."
"W....what are you talking about?!" Ara yelled, angry.
It roared at her, making her tremble with fear. "You DESTROY Gargoyle home! Filthy humans must DIE!" It took a step towards her, blood and saliva falling from its open maw onto the carpet.
"I don't understand. Your not real! Gargoyles are stone figures!" It growled low in its throat.

Instead of one long paragraph, it would be split up so people understand that the person that is talking has changed! Other than that, good work. Keep it up.

[Bebi Deru]

Yeah I already fixed it, sorry about that lol

[Obscured by the Shadows]

In the second paragraph, it still has two of them talking in the same one XD

[Bebi Deru]

I fixed it after you sent that lol XD

[Isabelle]

What an intense chapter! Can't wait to find out about the curse. Maybe add a little more drama at the end. Ara is almost dying so there are a lot of things you can bring in to let the reader feel their pain. But all in all a great and thrilling chapter.