The Termination of a so called

The Termination of a so called

A Poem by Regan Meade
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My views and opinions on Abortion.

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A woman's body is her temple,
She should have the right to do with it as she pleases,
No man should tell a woman that she should give up a life she wants to keep.

"Abortion:
The termination of a life not yet considered living.
A result of an intercourse with a man and woman,
Whether it is willingly or not."


If it is not willingly the woman is able to give up her 'child'
For in the end she might start resenting them for something they could not control
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Abothing is NOT a form of birth control!
No woman should use abortions as a way to ride her self
of a buren she never wanted.
If she did not want the end result she should have been more aware of the conciquences of intercourse.

© 2009 Regan Meade


Author's Note

Regan Meade
Please all I ask is that you don't flame me on an opinion that is mine. But i would like to here your opinions on the matter :)

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Well, you're certainly blunt in shouting (bold face, underlined) your message. I have a slight problem with the stanza break. It might read better to include the first two lines of the third stanza as the last two lines of the second stanza. This more clearly ties the 'if not' to the previous thought. As it is, I puzzled about what the 'if not' might mean. I had to go back and forth to decide whether the 'if not' was some sort of exclusionary thing that somehow contradicted what I thought the message (free choice, especially in rape cases). Good work and as with most poetry the message transcends the personal opinion.

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Well, you're certainly blunt in shouting (bold face, underlined) your message. I have a slight problem with the stanza break. It might read better to include the first two lines of the third stanza as the last two lines of the second stanza. This more clearly ties the 'if not' to the previous thought. As it is, I puzzled about what the 'if not' might mean. I had to go back and forth to decide whether the 'if not' was some sort of exclusionary thing that somehow contradicted what I thought the message (free choice, especially in rape cases). Good work and as with most poetry the message transcends the personal opinion.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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