Feeling

okay so I randomly got this inspiration because of a random line that I thought of...these are more like lyrics rather than a poem but whose to say that lyrics aren't just really awesome poems?

It's like I'm fallin' in rain

It's like I'm dancing on air

This feeling like I can't hold back

This feeling I can't let go

The sun's shining on my body

It's making my soul feel whole again

After momma & daddy 

my life has been full of holes

I didn't think that I could break this chain.

If didn't have you

It's like falling in rain

It's like I'm floatin in the ocean

No other feeling can compare

This feelings so true

This feelin I can't let go

When you came along 

I felt trapped in a room with no walls

Being boxed in

Never feeling anything 

but alone.

I couldn't take it anymore

So I had to let go.

There's this feeling inside 

It's tearing through the wall I've built

Being consumed 

Making everything alright

There's this feeling I can't hold back

This feeling I can't let go.

But with you 

It feels like I'm fallin in rain

Like I'm floatin on cloud

Being consumed by the ocean

Making everything alright

It's like I'm fallin' in rain

It's like I'm dancing on air

This feeling like I can't hold back

This feeling I can't let go

Author's Note

Constructive criticisms please but any comments are still more than welcome :D

Reviews

[Sourav]

Very uplifting poem. Freedom and joy is reflecting in your words. Nice flow, quite an enjoyable write.