Kagome, Kagome (かごめかごめ)

This was inspired somewhat by the children's game

Kagome Kagome

か�"めか�"め

 

A caged bird sings

         A little one cries,

 

         A caged bird swings

A little one sighs,

 

A caged bird sees

         A little one hides,

 

         A caged bird flees

A little one rides,

 

A caged bird flies

         A little one is hopeful,

 

         The caged bird is alone

The little one has withered,

 

Who stands behind you now?

Author's Note

Constructive criticism please. I would like to 'hear' what you have to say.

Reviews

[yuhee]

I knew this one. A children game in Japan. I love the vocaloid song of it. Nice to know that someone decided to write a poem about it. I like the way you construct this one.

[Regan Meade]

Thank you! I was actually inspired by the Vocaloid version, (probably couldn't tell by the picture haha ;D). It had taken me a bit to find a style that I wanted to use when I originally wrote this. ^^;