Cupido

These eyes look away when they meet yours,
These insecurities slip away,turning into chaos.
The knees buckle forward trying to reach you,
The memories appear in my head right on cue.
The heart beats shuttle then start again,
Marking me mad, even bordering on insane.
The warmth of your palm pressed against mine,
Raged desire set in motion, Oh so divine.
I wish my fate to be like Juliet's and not of Dido,
Wish I die with you, Oh my! "Cupido"...

Reviews

[Raghib]

Desires are the harbingers of chaos. A little more of it and you will keep on swimming in the dark ocean of 'want'. Cravings for love, the need for recognition, and the huge burden of being neglected. This sure makes a person's fate to be like Dido. The wish to be made Juliet was just destroyed. Forgotten in our own ruins. A good read !!

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Very warm feelings of passion. I love how you manage to rhyme your poems always.
I would like to know about 'Dido'

[Mikku]

The love story of Aeneas and Dido is narrated by Virgil in the Aeneid. After a long stay with Dido, Aeneas left her heart broken and she killed herself out of grief. There's more in this story than I could tell,try reading it.😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Sure. I will.

[Malvika]

Wow I really enjoyed reading it
It is very well crafted .
Great work :)

[Mikku]

Thanks a lot😊

[Mikku]

Tried adding a touch of latin and old English.... A random piece...would love suggestions for betterment..