Gale

Personified

Words can't describe this ache,
Those promises,why were they fake?
The fate did change, but for the worse,
Why was I subjected to this curse?

The cracked lips tells the tale,
That fateful day,roared a gale.
Gale that left me shattered,
Over the rails, raindrops clattered.

Raindrops were my tears,
Their salty marks the floor bears.
I lay there in pieces, my sky never again was blue,
You charred and froze me together, devastated my life,that gale was you.

Reviews

[Raghib]

These storms will come and pass. It is you who should remain strong and fight. I'll urge you to get up and stand rather than be thrown in debris. Be the eye of the storm. Let the storm revolve around you

[Mikku]

But sometimes the storm is too strong... And what if the person who is breaking you is the one you are fighting for, the one your are shielding...it becomes unendurable. Thanks all the more for this

[Raghib]

This only tells that you are sgeilding the wrong person. As unvelievable as it sounds today, you are destroying the person that is you and paving the way for destruction. Its better to yield to the reality than be destroyed later by it. Sometimes in life, life is right and we are wrong

[Mikku]

Giving up becomes impossible when it's the only thing you are dying for. And the merging of lie into truth and life into death makes the choosing all the more difficult

[Najam Us Saher]

You have woven a tale in very few sentences. I really liked this.

[Mikku]

It really means a lot.thank you

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.