Domino Effect

Domino Effect

A Poem by poembleederMLC30
"

i was destroyed upon falling

"
You're the very first domino to fall out of line
I tried to stop everything from falling and keeping it fine
You just came into my life to destroy all that's benign
And left me hanging, cursing, crying without a sign 

© 2015 poembleederMLC30


Author's Note

poembleederMLC30
Hi guys! this is my very first post, i hope you'll like my poem, i am open for opinions and all, feel free to type it down. :)

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I love the way you put the words together and not destroying the message..
Well done kababayan.
Keep writing.

Whoa. When s/he left you, be strong and thankful. S/he just made a space for the right one. Smile.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on September 8, 2015
Last Updated on September 8, 2015
Tags: love, betrayal, destroyed, left, cry, tear, killed