You've got a talent for enveloping the reader into the story! I liked it! I was a bit intimidated by the hard to pronounce names and lore. But other than that, great foundation for what seems like a great story. I myself am trying to write a bookf! But my advice would be to go with names a little bit more reader friend! :) Good luck! Hope to see more.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I will definitely keep that in mind, and I will look forward to reading your work!
I'm new here, I read some of your poems and I like it. There's something about it .. A deep concern .. read moreI'm new here, I read some of your poems and I like it. There's something about it .. A deep concern and feelings . Keep it up
9 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
9 Years Ago
Your welcome:-) hope u could help me also in improving my work. I used writing as my theraphy or out.. read moreYour welcome:-) hope u could help me also in improving my work. I used writing as my theraphy or outlet . Have a good day .
You've got a talent for enveloping the reader into the story! I liked it! I was a bit intimidated by the hard to pronounce names and lore. But other than that, great foundation for what seems like a great story. I myself am trying to write a bookf! But my advice would be to go with names a little bit more reader friend! :) Good luck! Hope to see more.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
I will definitely keep that in mind, and I will look forward to reading your work!
I'm new here, I read some of your poems and I like it. There's something about it .. A deep concern .. read moreI'm new here, I read some of your poems and I like it. There's something about it .. A deep concern and feelings . Keep it up
9 Years Ago
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
9 Years Ago
Your welcome:-) hope u could help me also in improving my work. I used writing as my theraphy or out.. read moreYour welcome:-) hope u could help me also in improving my work. I used writing as my theraphy or outlet . Have a good day .
My name is Mike Wolfe, Renaissance man. I have been writing since I was eleven, with over thirty ideas for a book. Only one of these has survived beyond fifty pages and will never see the light of day.. more..