Smoke the pain away

Smoke the pain away

A Poem by MikeV
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Smoke the pain away

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Smoking a vanilla flavored primetime
I can't believe it's not a joint
Sitting outside just watching time fly
Thinking, "what's the point?"

I chose a cancer stick
Over weed
It makes me sick
It's so unlike me

What's this world coming to
It looks like the end
Just a puff or two
And I know I'll be good again

A song comes on that makes me smile
A song that says the words I'm trying to say
I guess I'll just sit here for awhile
Listening to "smoke the pain away"









© 2013 MikeV


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Just to sit back and watch the world go by for a little while sounds inviting....

Your poem reminds me of the kids at school, hanging out in the field smoking joints and cigarettes - I would look at them and think..."stoners" as I ran around trying to be perfect. Perhaps they had the answer all along..

:) Julie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Lol thank you :)
I used to look at stoners like that too
then i became one :D
MsJewel

11 Years Ago

LOL! You're the best!



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Now, you stay on the straight and narrow, Mike! Ha! Didn't we talk about this before?? Angi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


never acquired a taste for smoking anything. When I was a kid, my dad was a chain smoker and it was always my job to clean out these massive lead crystal ash trays my parents had. As for weed and brownies - same thing - I was more of a beer and tequila chick. I still like a cold beer but the stuff makes me fat so...
This is a good poem though - its very lyrical - there are days I watch the world go by and wonder what's the point myself. Great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
I've never been too much of a drinker, but any habit I have had I could k.. read more
You need the medicinal stuff if you want to smoke the pain away Mike, or bake up some brownies, you don't even have to inhale. ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

We do that with Italiano Parmigiano Reggiano, make is really crisp, oh.....my stomach is grumbling n.. read more
MikeV

11 Years Ago

You'd love my moms cooking :)
The best part is, she taught my honey how to cook everything :D<.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Smart momma, she figured this way you wouldn't end up back on her doorstep, ha...and I'm sure I woul.. read more
Music soothes my pain and love...lol
Wonderful...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you, my friend :) I'm so glad you stopped by :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
I just chew juicy fruit gum ha...Enjoyed Mike as always...Rose

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Lol "chew the pain away"

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