It starts in the end

It starts in the end

Love is like a butterfly
a butterfly that was once a cocoon
a cocoon that carried life
life frozen in stone
stone so soft
soft like wings of a moth
a moth powdery and white
white as the purest love
love is where it all began
it all began with an egg
an egg from above
above the butterflies leg

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

First of all Science Class!
I like a comparison here...circle pf life and love...
Beautiful
thanks for sharing such awesome write^^

[MikeV]

Thank you very much :)

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks for a fun write mike^^

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks for a fun write mike^^

[Monster ^.^]

I love how the entire thing could start at any point, but you chose to start at the end... makes one think a lot why that is so... and it opens to a lot of possibilities... and definitely, Love.

[MikeV]

Thank you very much :)
I've been toying around with this style of writing

[SyberRose]

Nice one Mike...and i can tell you are loving this form...Rose:)...Enjoyed.

[MikeV]

Thank you so much, Rose :)
I'm loving it, it flows a lot smoother
To be honest, I can't think of anything to write and
This form of writing can be fun and somewhat challenging :)

[Frieda P]

I like how you spun this with the cocoon and how it all comes around full circle , an evolution of love but you lost me with that last line Mike 'above the butterfly's leg'.....

[MikeV]

Butterflies lay eggs that turn into caterpillars
That and I couldn't think of anything that rhymed with egg :P

[Frieda P]

Hahaha, that's your answer/ ;-P

[MikeV]

Lmao hey, at least I'm honest :)

[00000000000000000000000..]

That was great Mike:) an awesome writer!

[MikeV]

Thank you very much my friend :)

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Your very welcome Mike my friend:)