Eyes

Trying something new

I looked into eyes
eyes that seen truth
seen truth behind the lies
the lies that i used
I used that caused betrayal
betrayal that caused decay
decay of my soul
my soul i pray for every day
for every day that passes
passes faster then you think
you think it just something i say
i say, "its something i mean"

Reviews

[Abeer until dawn]

..and everything you mean can be seen in your "Eyes" !

Nice one, my friend

[MikeV]

Thank you very much, much appreciated :)

[Latifa]

I used that caused betrayal
betrayal that caused decay
decay of my soul
very powerful good poem it is

[MikeV]

I actually wrote the poem around those vey lines :)
Thank you so much, I appreciate it :)

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I felt that write big time been there before ! Well done as always Mike:)

[MikeV]

Thank you, greatly appreciated :)

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Again your very welcome Mike:)

[SyberRose]

I like the form...and enjoyed reading your words...you did this theme very well Mike...Rose:)

[MikeV]

Thank you, Rose :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the word play...and the set up of this piece...you do this form very well here...

as the soul decays, we learn a little...maybe a little too late.

[MikeV]

Thank you very much :) i appreciate your kind words

[Heather]

this is beautiful and so very true, i enjoyed this, great job as per!! :D :)

[MikeV]

Thank you very much :)

[Heather]

no problemo! you are very welcome!! :D