Vice

Vice

Tears flow freely from the floodgates
that are my eyes
pills

hatred and anger become intertwined
to become one soulless embodiment
of darkness
pills

no emotions, no feelings, no dreams
only imprisonment
in a lost mind of forgetfullness
pills

Happiness, joy, fulfillment
Contentment, overwhelming sense
of peace and well being
weed

Reviews

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I lived those times you speak I feel that's what you speak of anyways, Sorta making 1 feel as super man an unstoppable force breaking upon the ways in life. I get it don't live it anymore seen it take way to many to the grounds of life where they can never speak. Great Poem MikeV

[MikeV]

Thank you very much :) much appreciated

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Welcome fellow writer:)

[Pryde Foltz]

For me its a glass of great wine, but just a glass and then my vice turns to euphoric nonsense and then a hangover.

[MikeV]

Thank you, your review put a perma grin on my face :)

[Pryde Foltz]

I like that.

[Frieda P]

I see you're at it again Mike, love how you bare your soul, take the white ones to wake up, the pink ones to go to sleep, the blue ones for good sex and the green ones for psychedelic dreams ;-) Only kidding, really like this one.

[MikeV]

:D thank you so much, your reviews always put a smile on my face :)

[Frieda P]

Ditto my friend, my pleasure :-)

[Sami Khalil]

"no emotions, no feelings, no dreams
only imprisonment
in a lost mind of forgetfullness
pills"

Your writes are so great for they raise awareness of our modern ills ...Bravo

[MikeV]

Thank you for such a kind review, my friend! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Abeer until dawn]

as it continue to be our weakness at some point, our vice can't be held against us ... it's just the matter of going downward for the sake of rising up again..

keep writing,

[MikeV]

Thank you, my friend :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we all have those vices that help us get by...reminds me of the Rolling Stones song.."Mother's Little Helper"

a telling piece...pertinent to today's time and how tough it is to get through a day, a week, a month...but even an hour.

[MikeV]

Thank you, my friend! :)