Chills

Chills

A Poem by MikeV
"

Things that give me the chills

"
Aluminum foil being chewed

a pencil with no eraser
scraping the paper

a fork scraping a dry metal pan

but what really gives me the chills
Is when
i try to write
and there's no ink in the pen

© 2013 MikeV


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Add those little wooden spoons for the cups of ice cream on the tongue and you have a hit. Very cool my friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Jack! :)
Ha exactly, deal with the rest but there's no contest there, although your ink seems to be flowing pretty damn consistently, so I'd not worry about it, just don't go chewing on any aluminum foil.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


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MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :) i don't remember writing this, i think i was half asleep or something ;)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh I've had that happen, you're like surprise! ;-) hahah
And chalk on a blackboard I always hated that...I find it easier to type my poems...
I think writers block last a lot longer then a day...ha...the first line is always the hardest for me...once I write that down it gets a lot easier Mike...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Rose! :) i never actually use a pen either, just my ipod
lol i shoulda said
read more
A writers worst nightmare :P and then you cant find a pen -gasp-
thats when i use notepad on my computer :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


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MikeV

11 Years Ago

I thought about changing the ending to what i told Rose
i never use a pen
To be honest i.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

11 Years Ago

lmao haha either do i :P mainly use my comp :P

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Added on September 30, 2013
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