Her eyes

I wrote this for my honey, I love you babe!

I get lost in your eyes
A beautiful sea of blue
They remind me of stars from the heavens
An angel is you

My dear please don't close your eyes,
Don't even blink
I'd be jealous of the darkness your lids provide
My soul would be weak

If those eyes were to ever close
Be it in death or a peaceful sleep
Know my heart is aching
And my eyes gently weep

Author's Note

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Subtle flow in this - Mike...the lines draw me in and the whole feel of the write...as I believe you did give us the reader a sense of the emotion you wanted us to envision throughout the piece...the music goes with the atmosphere of this also...thanks for the invite...I'm back to work...so I will be a bit behind in my reviews...

[MikeV]

Thank you my friend! :) it's good to see you :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

that is so sweet and cute, i think im in love with the song lol thanks allot gonna have to download again now have to have it this is a mad song lol, anyway back to the poem.
So sweet as i said romantic and emotional straight from your heart.
Give it to her she will adore it, its beautiful. :)

[MikeV]

Thank you so much! The song is my honey and i's song :)
She loved the poem and song on the page :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

thats great it is an amazing song :) thats cute :)

[wordwarrior]

Ahh such loving thoughts Mike. I hope she likes it, if you give it to her.

[MikeV]

Thank you so much! She loved it :)

[Michael G. Smith]

My favorite of yours except the eyes I love are chocolate brown.

[MikeV]

Thank you so much! :)

[Frieda P]

Very sweet Mike, nice to get lost in someone's eyes, but you're jumping the gun there at the end, no? I mean, luverly. ;-)

[MikeV]

Lmfao thank you my jokester friend, thank you for the kind review
And for making me laugh my a*s off :)

[Frieda P]

Ha-ha did your significant other read this one? Just saying. ;-P

[MikeV]

She said it was sweet, and that that's why she fell in love
With me, cause I'v always written poetry for her :)

[Frieda P]

Good, I'd be afraid to close my eyes tonight. haha ;-)

[MikeV]

Lmao :) you literally crack me up

[Frieda P]

You know I'm just yanking your chain, I'm sure she'll sleep fine tonight, with one eye open Lol

[MikeV]

Lmao that's hilarious

[SyberRose]

Beautiful Mike...very romantic...and i love Keith Urbans song too...Rose:)

[MikeV]

Thank you Rose! :) that's my honey and I's song :)

[SyberRose]

Oh is it...aahhhh thats sweet...

[Lydia Shutter]

Soft, sweet, and romantic. So lovely, Mike. I am sure your lady will be happy to read your words. Lydi**

[MikeV]

Thank you :) I hope so