Her eyes

I wrote this for my honey, I love you babe!

I get lost in your eyes
A beautiful sea of blue
They remind me of stars from the heavens
An angel is you

My dear please don't close your eyes,
Don't even blink
I'd be jealous of the darkness your lids provide
My soul would be weak

If those eyes were to ever close
Be it in death or a peaceful sleep
Know my heart is aching
And my eyes gently weep

Author's Note

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Subtle flow in this - Mike...the lines draw me in and the whole feel of the write...as I believe you did give us the reader a sense of the emotion you wanted us to envision throughout the piece...the music goes with the atmosphere of this also...thanks for the invite...I'm back to work...so I will be a bit behind in my reviews...

[MikeV]

Thank you my friend! :) it's good to see you :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...

[Heather]

this is beautiful! vivid imagery and sweet how the poem is based on two parts to our body, great job!!

[MikeV]

Thank you very much! :)

[Heather]

no problemo! its my pleasure!! :D

[L.Edward]

Well-penned. Eyes are the wondows to the soul, indeed.

[MikeV]

Thank you my friend! :)

[Barbara Walker]

This is very sweet, with good rhymes!

[MikeV]

Thank you very much! :)

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is beautiful.

I get lost in your eyes..a beautiful sea of blue..
I think anyone in love would want to get lost like that...I know I would.

:) Julie

[MikeV]

Thank you so much! :) i get lost in her completely :) she's my everything

[MsJewel]

That is so sweet! :)

[Aziz Luther]

Nice poem. Simple and elegant. I love when simplicity brings forth such great poetry

[MikeV]

Thank you very much! :)

[Sami Khalil]

A hopeless romantic at his best ...Thank you for penning...:)

[MikeV]

Thank you very much my friend! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Donald]

I wish I could look into my girl's eyes. They contain her soul. Very well done.

[MikeV]

Thank you! :)

[5924]

this is a really cute and really sweet poem

[MikeV]

Thank you! :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Romantic! This line "I'd be jealous of the darkness your lids provide" has an interesting play of words. ;)
I hope my eyes are blue, just as you had beautifully described. :x

[MikeV]

Thank you Blue! :) are your eyes blue? You got me wonderin :)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

No. Mine is in a shade of brown... I have always wished to have blue eyes. However, that might not work best on my tan skin. :)