Sorrows of the eternal

Sorrows of the eternal

Lifes sorrows and woes weigh upon thy shoulders
all is transformed into figments of imagination
lifes breath escapes into the eternal

Author's Note

I know it sounds like jibberish but there is
meaning tto it all

Reviews

[Anna Ivy]

To me this is me. All worries and troubles that hang over me like a black cloud eventually retract from me, as if it was something someone else is dealing with or something I read about. No matter my problems and their severity, I know that in the end when I am long gone, it doesn't matter because time goes on and eternity reminds us of the endless future.

[MikeV]

You remind me of me! :) i loved your view :)

[Anna Ivy]

We aren't alone in this world!! I'll bake some cookies

[MikeV]

You just gave me an idea for my next little write

[Anna Ivy]

Yes! Send me a read request when it's up!!

[MikeV]

Its up, its called "Death"

[Frieda P]

It's not gibberish at all, made me think, that's always a good thang ;-) I could actually take this one a few places in my mind personally.

[MikeV]

Thank you very much! I'm glad it made sense to you :)

[Frieda P]

Since my sister committed suicide, these kinds of reads hold a whole new meaning for me....thanks for sharing this one Mike. Always my pleasure.

[MikeV]

Check out cascading dreams. i gotta admit something, i fell off the wagon last night and while i was
on cloud nine i came up with the two pieces

[MikeV]

My cousin and uncle committed suicide too, i was so close to them
I'm so sorry about your sister :(

[Anna Ivy]

Wonderful piece by the way!

[MikeV]

Thank you very much! :)

[wordwarrior]

Hmmm yes this is deeply thought provoking Mike. Life weighs heavily on our shoulders for so many different reasons and we'll all end up dying one day and we need to have a clear view of where we will be(if anywhere)
Interesting piece!

[MikeV]

Thank you! :) i loved your view on it