If I can't

If I can't

A Poem by MikeV
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If i can't

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If i can't see, can i still dream?
If i can't breathe, can i still scream?
If i can't count, can i say my abcs?
If i can't mount, can i ride a horsie?
If i can't talk, can i explain myself?
If i can't walk, can i climb the ladder to wealth?

© 2013 MikeV


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This one is thought provoking isn't it! i have often wondered about someone in a coma, what can they do? I like how your style changes with each write, you keep things interesting and fresh.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I usually just write whatever comes to my mind
its one frustrating write and helplessly thoughtful ...

thanks for sharing the words...^^

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
its one frustrating write and helplessly thoughtful ...

thanks for sharing the words...^^

Posted 11 Years Ago



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MikeV
MikeV

Rawlins, WY



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