When did I stop being your son

When did I stop being your son

A Poem by MikeV

Is it because we fight
Or Did I do something wrong
I just wanna know
When did I stop being your son

Is it because I got old
Should I have stayed young
I just wanna know
When did I stop being your son

I used to be your life
I was your number one
But I guess at one point in time
I stopped being your son





© 2013 MikeV


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I'm sorry you feel alienated from your parent :( I feel the exact same way about my mother, but you've got a beautiful expression of the confusion of the situation. I like it, despite the sadness

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
mommy issues?? ha ha just kidding i love this actually its like every abused child's thought

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MikeV

11 Years Ago

Lol thanks

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Added on September 6, 2013
Last Updated on September 7, 2013

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MikeV
MikeV

Rawlins, WY



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