The moment

Dec 9, 2011. 11:09am

We live in the essence of the moment. No moment is true, time is an entire moment. We are the essence of time.

Reviews

[Jasmine Michel'le Brown]

wonderful,

This poem basically sounds like the end of days.
Just one hint though I do love the poem can't you make it a little bit more longer? if not it okay it's still wonderful.

[MikeV]

Thank you so much! I wrote this a couple years back
you're review has inspired me to make it to something more
and so i shall. Thank you again :)

[Jasmine Michel'le Brown]

awe,

well you are very welcome I love to write, I love to give advice. On how to make writting and poems stronger and longer.
this one is very good even though it was a couple years back I love it. But if it was a little longer it would be perfect but as i see it is already perfect.

awe well thank you I shall be your idol of joy :).

if you need help with anything just let me know I am always writing up something feel free to read and comment.