He isn't me

More playin with rhyme schemes

You askded me to meet some new dude
you told me to be honest
So i told you the truth

he isn't me
I'm all you need
baby, why can't you see
he isn't me

you looked into my eyes
said he's done nothin wrong
i looked at you and sighed

he isn't me
I'm all you need
baby, why can't you see
he isn't me

I told you there's no way you're gonna be his
i pulled you close
and gave you a kiss

he isn't me
I'm all you need
baby, why can't you see
he isn't me

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

This would be a good song if it had a few more stanzas. Enjoyed reading!

[MikeV]

Thank you! I couldn't think of more words to go with it :p

[Erench]

ooh lala likes it a lot keep it up very great piece keep it up my friend :)

[MikeV]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

[Erench]

No problem :)

[Laminators Dubai]

thats a one sassy, rhyme...
really thoughtful and full confidence...
really enjoyable read.....

[MikeV]

Thank you! :) you pretty muched nailed my emotions on this piece

[Laminators Dubai]

my bad.......

[MikeV]

Why your bad?

[Laminators Dubai]

d-d-d-drop it...
^_^

[MikeV]

Lol k, you got it

[wordwarrior]

Nice one Mike and has a feeling of lyrics about it. Love is never easy and we hold onm to what we have fiercely.
Much enjoyed. A poem that's sad, yet uplifting and a bit lighter that what I've read of yours in the past.

[MikeV]

Thank you so much! I was hoping it had a song like feel!
I'm trying to make my writings less vulgar lol

[wordwarrior]

LOL You write how YOU want to Mike

[MikeV]

Hehe thank you, i will :)