The dress

"That's such a pretty dress, it will make me glow"
"But it's not your size, how do you know?"
"A woman's intuition" is what she said
"That's just blind ambition, it's in your head"
She looked at me shocked and amazed
She didn't move or talk, so I waved
"Ok,"I gave in, "go try it on"
She smiled and said "I'm gonna prove you wrong"
When she came out, I was in awe
She was the most beautiful thing I ever saw
I said, "my dear, you look so hot"
She whispered in my ear, "now just imagine it off"

Reviews

[Aziz Luther]

Nice poem. I really like the approach of the story. Been thru this and never thought of writing this. Thank you MikeV you just given me a different perspective for the day

[MikeV]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed :)

[Dye]

Never argue with a women silly. Although this little disagreement seemed to end well. The last line wrapped this up nicely.

[MikeV]

Thank you! Believe me my arguin days are up...maybe ;)

[Dye]

Well then I would say you're a smart man.....maybe ;)

[Erench]

whoa there my friend ya getting a little sexual there at the end lol very well written keep it up my friend

[MikeV]

Thank you! :)

[Erench]

Ur welcome :)

[wordwarrior]

WOW! Love that last line. Such a sensual poem with great imagery, until we get to that last line, which is hot!
Love it! Great writing indeed.

[MikeV]

Thank you so much! i appreciate all the positive feedback!