The pen

Every time the pen hits paper
Art comes out and I'm the painter
Be it in the form of pictures or words
I'll show you things you've never seen or heard
It's like magic, whatever I envision I can do
But it's tragic, once the pens out of ink, I'm through.

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Love the rhyme scheme in this piece. Flows well. Love your syntax. Short piece but it says a lot!

[MikeV]

Thank you very much! :)

[Laminators Dubai]

pen is one of the best subject i can ever understand....
i write with pen and sometimes for pen...
you may know if you read my i still use ink pen and highlighters ink...

great write keep going....

[MikeV]

I'll take a look at them. Thank you Glitch

[CreativeCookie]

"But it's tragic, once the pens out of ink, I'm through." that's when you get another pen. I love this poem, keep it up!
Love,
CreativeCookie

[MikeV]

Thank you! :)

[Aziz Luther]

Short clear and shows the art of where words meet paintings to create visual arts. Love it

[MikeV]

Thank you!

[Nicole]

Your rhyme scheme is very clever with this piece, the person depicted in the poem seems tragically inspired by his ability to write and depends on his pad and pen.

[MikeV]

Thank you! You're pretty accurate in your review
:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I love this rhymes amazingly.
very short but great little poem.
All writers relate to this which is what makes this poem so great.
where would we be without our pens or a keybord for that matter haha.
Grat poem very meaningfull enjoyed the read

[MikeV]

Thank you! :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)