The Son Of The Devil : Asuna Otsuka

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The cold wind blew, the street lamps flickered. No one was in sight, the street was empty. All the house were locked, everything seemed lifeless. A shadow is seen, it would have been unnoticeable if it had not moved. It looked so familiar, if only it was a little closer.

 

A 9 year old wakes up to find himself on the ground. He had blue eyes, brown/black hair, looked really skinny and was wearing clothes torn from a number of places.  It looked as if he lived in a prison. Even with all that, he still looked naturally handsome. He stands up and brushes the dust off of him. He whispers to himself, “That dream again…” He looks down, disappointed, if only he could figure out what that shadow meant. He pulls himself together and opens the window. Bright sunlight shines on his face, birds chirp, the wind blows on the trees; another sunny day. He gives a smile while watching the kids play in the ground. A harsh female voice is heard, “ Asuna, GET DOWN HERE!” .The boy’s face suddenly stiffens. And he slowly walks down the stairs, sad and scared. After being scolded for what seemed like an hour, Asuna apologized to the old cranky lady. She grabbed Asuna from the ear and dragged him to the dusty garage. “Clean and Neat!”. Asuna understood here command and nodded. She walked away to the kitchen. Asuna sighed and started cleaning up the garage.

 

A 9 year old girl is seen eating her breakfast. Judging by her clothing, someone would think she’s the daughter of a Queen. She was wearing a lovely dress full of gold glitter. She had blond hair, green eyes and had a cute face. She looked clean, neat and sparkling. Some might even think she was the young Cinderella. Even with all this she looked off. She seemed bored by all of this goodness. A sweet voice of a female is heard “Good Morning Dear, enjoying your breakfast?”. The girl simply nods. She seemed like the total opposite of Asuna.

 

Coming back to Asuna, who had finished cleaning the garage, who was pushed around by the old cranky lady and was forced to eat the worse type of food ever, raw meat. Soon after he finished eating, the old lady threw his school bag at his face and told him to get ready for school. Asuna obeyed her, took a quick shower and changed into his, yet again, torn-from-all-over-the-place uniform.

 

Asuna is actually excited to go to his new school, he had to quit the last one and had to leave his old friends all because the cranky old lady had to pay his fees. This new one was a government school that charged no money. This was because Tokyo wanted to give every kid: Big or small, smart or dumb, rich or poor the best type of education. This was the only lucky thing that happened to Asuna in his entire life. When he finally reached the school, Asuna’s jaw dropped. He was staring at a gigantic school, with a huge garden and ground. All the buildings in the school were modernized and it looked as it was a high-tech space-ship. Asuna was very happy. The 3^rd class was over and it was lunch time. Asuna had to sit alone as no one wanted to be friends with a “beggar”. Most of the kids in this school were rich so Asuna was having a hard time fitting in. After what seemed minutes to Asuna, it was time to go home. But just thinking about going home made Asuna depressed. He never wanted to go back to that old, stupid, cranky, crazy, abusive lady! He decided he would steal some food and supplies from home and stay at the school. And he did so.

 

Flash-forward, A 13 year old is sitting in the corner, he is handsome but his pretty face doesn’t match with his clothing. He is recognized as our Asuna. Kids laugh at him as they pass by, whispering jokes about Asuna to each other, spreading ridiculous and fake rumors about him. Asuna is now pretty used to it and prefers it to stay this way. He might be smart, but no one appreciates that except his teachers. He ignores everything and just stares at his watch, waiting for school to end so he can go back to his tent he made on the small mountain beside the school.

 

A 13 year old girl comes up to Asuna. She has blond hair, a beautiful face, green eyes, and is wearing the most fashionable clothes on Earth. She is recognized as little-Cinderella. She greets Asuna with a smile. Asuna, thinking she might be one of the girls who pranks him every day, ignored her. Becoming angry at his ignorance she said, “HEY I’M TALKING TO YOU!” at a very deafening volume. Everyone stared at Asuna and the girl. Asuna grabbed the girl from her arm and dragged her to the back of the school. “What are you DOING!?” was the question Asuna was about to say when it was asked by the girl. Asuna said with anger in his voice, “Did you HAVE to say it that loud!?” Asuna didn’t know how angrily he said it but the girl started crying. Asuna was really worried and tried to calm her down. When she calmed down she started being all weird. She took out her arm and said, “My names Futo Yukki, what’s yours?” He awkwardly replied, “Uh… Asuna.” They started talking, awkwardly at first but starting getting better at conversing with each other.

 

Flash-Forward, months had passed and we see Asuna and Futo playing video games together. These days, Asuna spent most of his time at Futo’s mansion. It stayed like that until one day Asuna didn’t come to Futo’s house. After that day, Asuna was not to be seen again. Though Asuna was gone, he was still inside Futo’s mind. She always had dreams where she would meet Asuna and hug him but then Asuna’s eyes would turn red, he would smile and stab her in the stomach and whisper “ Long time no see Futo”.

 

Flash-Forward, years had passed and there was still no sign of Asuna. Everyone had forgotten Asuna and had moved on. Everyone except Futo. She remained depressed all the time. She didn’t want anyone except Asuna. She abandoned all her friends. One day as Futo was going home. Her car stopped. The driver told Futo that the engine stopped working and he was going to go and fix it. Futo waited and waited but the driver didn’t come back. She got out of the car just to find the body of the driver, his head decapitated. Because of this Futo jumped back and fell to the ground. Futo looked around while trying to stand up and looked at a man…. No a creature. It had extremely long nails, it had teeth sharper and spikier than a lion, a long face and horns growing out of his head. His eyes showed nothing but death and despair. Futo stood up and she was about to run away but the creature ran towards her faster than light and stabbed her. She fell on her knees, her hand covering her stomach. She started whispering to herself, “This was the nightmare….. But where’s Asu-“. Just as she was about to say her name, he appeared out of nowhere. A cold wind blew, The Street lamps flickered. No one was in sight, the street was empty. All houses were locked. The place was lifeless. And suddenly a roar came up from the sky and the creature came smashing down. Asuna’s eyes actually turned red. He, just like the creature, gave a frightening roar and fought with the creature. The battle went on and on until finally the creature was killed by Asuna. But Asuna didn’t seem heroic at all. He seemed evil. He was smiling creepily at what was left of the creature. He came back to normal and took Futo to the hospital. After that day, he was never seen again. Though, the body of the cranky old woman was found later that day

 

During this, Futo found out that her dream was fake illusion by the creature to make her think Asuna was evil and Asuna found out that the dream he used to have was just a warning his powers were giving him to tell him to train for this battle.

 

The End…..

Or is it O.O

Author: Micheal Alexander

Stay Scared

Author's Note

This was just for testing.... Just to see what people think of my story. Sorry if i disappointed you :(.

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

A very good idea, nicely done. It still needs a little work - you have several instances of mixed tenses and various punctuation and typing errors, but these are easy to clean up. Looking forward to the next episode.