ten years after

what i saw....what i felt...song goes with the poem

Will I ever know

Come on come on

 

Can I live my life

Come on come on

 

Can I forget the past

Come on come on

 

Have I seen too much

Come on come on

 

On a perfect day

I saw evil strike
Come on come on

 

Felt the blow

Blood drain away

Come on come on

 

Smelled the smoke

Watched them die

Come on come on

 

Ripped a part

of me away

Come on come on

 

Don’t tell me

not to hate

Come on come

 

The proof lies

in that hole

Come on come on

 

Cover it with

concrete

Come on come on

 

It will always be

In that ground

And within me

 

come on come on………..

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Brad]

when the HELL did you write this??? who unsubscribed me from you?? what the hell is going on around here?? since when can you write?? who are you?? seriously...i was subscribed to you and i kept seeing all these comments going out to you and i look and i ain't subscribbled to you anymo!!! what da???

sigh. anyhow, your writes come few and far between my friend, but when they do make it into the naked light of day you freakin wow me! you've got a hell of a mind, my friend, always like it when you share a little of that inner gospel with us heathens

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you, InYrDreams

[Becky C Strukamp]

Brilliant poem. My heart beat a bit faster as I read it. Excellent!

[Michael of Gilead]

Thanks Poppy, appreciate it :)

[Ruth]

Woahhh! Hard hitting beaut! This is brilliant and suffocating at the same time..goes so well with the song..I agree...perfect! A hard deal dealt here...superb!
xx