ten years after

what i saw....what i felt...song goes with the poem

Will I ever know

Come on come on

 

Can I live my life

Come on come on

 

Can I forget the past

Come on come on

 

Have I seen too much

Come on come on

 

On a perfect day

I saw evil strike
Come on come on

 

Felt the blow

Blood drain away

Come on come on

 

Smelled the smoke

Watched them die

Come on come on

 

Ripped a part

of me away

Come on come on

 

Don’t tell me

not to hate

Come on come

 

The proof lies

in that hole

Come on come on

 

Cover it with

concrete

Come on come on

 

It will always be

In that ground

And within me

 

come on come on………..

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[WatashLegend]

powerful write, tell em the way it is!, great job

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you Judas, apperciate it

[Judas Hammer]

awesome write......I was transfixed by your mantra. Good job

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you very much Thomas

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Powerful and designed to impact thought instead of reason into chaos, well done, a great read.

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you very much Emma

[emmajoy]

A power behind the power, words behind the music .. scream and shout raw energy tripping with your thoughts. Knocks me sideways and back again, maybe soon, but not sure when

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you so much, Ta'Shandra

[Tasha]

This was brilliant, I really liked. it.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Michael of Gilead]

lol...Brad, i have no idea about what happened to your subscibing...i suspect foul play sir!

Well thanks for the review, but my brain is mush....mushed potatoes....mmmmm

oh! sorry i drifted...

I put this lil ditty down last night, i've been having this whirl around in my brain on and off....was watching rescue me and said damn it...ill put it to paper