ten years after

what i saw....what i felt...song goes with the poem

Will I ever know

Come on come on

 

Can I live my life

Come on come on

 

Can I forget the past

Come on come on

 

Have I seen too much

Come on come on

 

On a perfect day

I saw evil strike
Come on come on

 

Felt the blow

Blood drain away

Come on come on

 

Smelled the smoke

Watched them die

Come on come on

 

Ripped a part

of me away

Come on come on

 

Don’t tell me

not to hate

Come on come

 

The proof lies

in that hole

Come on come on

 

Cover it with

concrete

Come on come on

 

It will always be

In that ground

And within me

 

come on come on………..

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Love it! Poignant... this has the underlining emotion of anger...within the concrete lies a hole where hate resides, buried. Thank for sharing. Nicely done. :)

[Michael of Gilead]

I appreciate it very much Robbie :)

[luviva]

uhmm yeah so that hole is the weathered soulo after 10 years of loving her ryt??
anyway thts my twist to the poem but its such a great poem
loved it en thanxx for sharing.

[Robin]

yeah ...

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you much Sir Robin :)

[Robin]

powerful poetry Michael

[Michael of Gilead]

Coming from a true poet i very much appreciate your comment :)

[Sirius King]

very nice, i like the flow,,,could be a song

[Michael of Gilead]

Thanks man, it was obviously influenced by the song

[Sirius King]

yes i noticed that after i wrote my comment lol

[Michael of Gilead]

well, you see what happens when i'm watching rescue me and been drinking...lol

[Sirius King]

lol

[MoriartyMesa]

Now this is what I like, Honest work

[Michael of Gilead]

thanks man, when you've lived it you own it eh?

[Leslie Philibert]

Strong poem,not too sure I understand it.Sounds like a song.

[Michael of Gilead]

Thank you so much Lin-J

[LinBin]

great write, well done x

[Michael of Gilead]

Thanks very much Watash