one thing i know i dont want is to live anywhere near where trains pass. yet your opening statement was believable and understandable. the memory of a train horn blaring is special to you and while i can not relate i know the feeling behind it. nor do i know what Maraschino cherries are, but i remember eating something delicious as a child and those memories still warm my heart.
the more specific the details, the more universal the appeal. you have understood and played with this truism so well here. im from the other side of the world and yet we are connected on some level. nostalgia is universal and while the details of our memories differ, heart understands heart.
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I'm glad you enjoyed and found familiarity in the words. Thank you for reading :)
one thing i know i dont want is to live anywhere near where trains pass. yet your opening statement was believable and understandable. the memory of a train horn blaring is special to you and while i can not relate i know the feeling behind it. nor do i know what Maraschino cherries are, but i remember eating something delicious as a child and those memories still warm my heart.
the more specific the details, the more universal the appeal. you have understood and played with this truism so well here. im from the other side of the world and yet we are connected on some level. nostalgia is universal and while the details of our memories differ, heart understands heart.
Posted 2 Weeks Ago
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2 Weeks Ago
I'm glad you enjoyed and found familiarity in the words. Thank you for reading :)
A thought provoking write for sure! The 4 am sleepovers when we were supposed to be sleep by 12, Having mother fix us all banana splits with plenty of maraschino cherries and ice cream smearing all around our chattering mouths. What a sweet write!
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Right! Days I will miss dearly. Thank you for reading!
"The days we would not know were to be treasured" how very, very true.
Oh to fall back into the innocence of our childhood, teen years, before life and work got in the way of living, our lives becoming, sometimes and often, an existence around our working hours, ughhh
Loved this piece
Hello! My name is Mikaila
Occasionally I put out small musings and poems
As for projects, I am currently working on a couple of fantasy novels but I also write short stories with magical realism ele.. more..