Waiting for your reply....

I knew it at first and maybe I didn't want to admit it
Maybe I just couldn't accept it
It doesn't have to be this way
It can keep going on
Though we would keep hurting ourselves
Can I ever get over it?
Only if you can
Can I find another way to be happy?
I won't know unless I try
I need to get back to my old self
No matter how much I don't want it
Maybe I can renew myself
Only if you want this
I know it's bad and so do you
It's hard to stop once the strings be tied for so long
How do I cut the line?
How can I say goodbye?
Is it proper to say it like this?
Tell me what I want to hear again
I'm just sitting here waiting for your response
yet I hear nothing
It hurts so badly
I can't stop this pain
It's sharp and my hearts tender
Can you not feel it too?
I wish for it to not be over
Yet I do not know how to save such a dead flower
I wish again and again
To go back
All the way
To that day
When we first talked
I miss it and I wish I could hang onto it forever
I don't want to let it go
Yet we are dieing more every day
So let's say goodbye here
Because I'm okay
Are you okay too?
We can just be friends
Let's just end
I'll be waiting here
For your reply....

Author's Note

Sorry if there are any grammar problems, I didn't feel like checking it today ^^"
Plzandthanx for any reviews because they are welcomed~

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The fall out and the redemption in the lines...just keeps going and going...but in the end you must realize it's over and move on... I did a quick check for you:

I knew it at first and maybe I didn't want to admit it
Maybe I just couldn't accept it
It doesn't have to be this way
It can keep going on
Though we would keep hurting ourselves
Can I ever get over it?
Only if you can
Can I find another way to be happy?
I won't know unless I try
I need to get back to my old self
No matter how much I don't want it
Maybe I can renew myself
Only if you want this
I know it's bad and so do you
It's hard to stop once the strings be tied for so long
How do I cut the line?
How can I say goodbye?
Is it proper to say it like this?
Tell me what I want to hear again
I'm just sitting here waiting for your response
yet I hear nothing
It hurts so badly
I can't stop this pain
It's sharp and my hearts tender
Can you not feel it too?
I wish for it to not be over
Yet I do not know how to save such a dead flower
I wish again and again
To go back
All the way
To that day
When we first talked
I miss it and I wish I could hang onto it forever
I don't want to let it go
Yet we are dying more every day
So let's say goodbye here
Because I'm okay
Are you okay too?
We can just be friends
Let's just end
I'll be waiting here
For your reply....

I believe "dieing" is the only thing misspelled...